its kind of a mainstream rap song but its not "gangsta" or any of that. I've been making songs for fun since i was 15(now age 20) but have been studying poetry since around age 11. It has an awesome beat and chorus and I would really appreciate your opinion on the song or anything you want to comment on, thank you. I'm verses 1 & 3 btw, thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PyXfX1jZAJs