Okay, so we have to write a report...could anyone check it for grammer, spelling, better word choices? thanks:)
In Richard Connells’ short story, the most dangerous games, he presents the character, Zaroff, to the story; many people truly believe that he was right to start the “game”, that he had good reasons and he basically didn’t anything wrong from their point of view. Yet, if you asked the families of the loved ones he killed on that island I’d bet you’d get a different answer. The sake of mankind is a crucial point here; it’s illegal and wrong to take another person’s life just for your own bazar needs. Jeffery Dahmer shows many uncalled actions just as Zaroff did. Jeffery was a horrific serial killer who murdered then ate his victims. He, like Zaroff did not have any emotions toward the people he was killing; murdering was as simple as entertainment to them. In result they both were murdered after people discovered what crime they had been committing.
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good except 1 little thing! "The sake of mankind is a crucial point here"
when i believe it should be "The sake of mankind is at a crucial point here"
hope i helped! maybe you purposely did that, but it seems good to me, lots of exotic words not usualy used in day-to-day talking, :)
Capitalize the title...The Most Dangerous Games...1st sentence is way toooooo long and confusing..
spelling....bizarre
---vague and confusing....the sake of mankind is it's illegal to.....? "The sake of mankind is a crucial point here; it’s illegal and wrong to take another person’s life just for your own bazar needs."
what's an "uncalled action"... if you were going to be a crazy serial killer...his actions were called for.
appeared to have no remorse...may have gotten joy or anger (emotions) from killing
Your last sentence makes it sounds like that "as a result of murder being entertainment for them they were killed".
Sorry, but it looks as if you didn't proof read your material before you submitted the question.
Here's one from wiki:
A bazaar (Bengali: বাà¦à¦¾à¦°, Persian: بازار, Arabic: بازار, Urdu: بازار, Turkish: pazar, Serbian: pazar, Polish: bazar, Malay: pasar, Albanian: pazar, Hindi: बाà¤à¤¼à¤¾à¤°, Greek: ÏαζάÏι (pazari), Cypriot Greek: pantopoula[1]) is a permanent[citation needed] merchandising area, marketplace, or street of shops where goods and services are exchanged or sold. The term is sometimes also used to refer to the "network of merchants, bankers and craftsmen" who work that area.[2] The word derives from the Persian word bÄzÄr, the etymology of which goes back to the Middle Persian word baha-char (بÙاÚار), meaning "the place of prices".[3