Hi!:) I'm running for treasurer in my school's SGA and we have to write a one minute speech. This is what I have so far and I'd appreciate it so much if you can suggest what else I should add and/or edit. Thank you so much!

Good afternoon students and staff. Do you want someone who is dependable, organized, responsible, and excels in math to handle and budget student council funds? Hi, my name is______, and I am an 8th grader here in ______ Middle School. I am running for the opportunity to be your strong, reliable treasurer. I believe with my hard work, we will be able to have fun and memorable dances, activities and an awesome end of school field trip. I feel that I am qualified for this job because I know how to handle funds and use them wisely. I promise to contribute ideas that best suite our student body and tell my intentions and solutions. I feel with this we will have a successful school year.