every day i think of you
even at night i dream of you
only to wake up with the memories i have of you
or
day by day i think of you
night by night i dream of you
only to wake up with the memories i have of you
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I like it. You just need to make it longer and create a more vivid image so that the reader knows what you are talking about or at least has an idea
I think personally think the second one is better, but you may have a different opinion.
I don't know why I like the second one, but it just seems to flow on.
Maybe though, you can mix them together like:
Day by day I think of you
Even a night I dream of you
Only to wake up with memories I have of you
.....
But it's your choice!
Texas Chainsaw Massacre.
the first one
first one
I like the 2nd one better. It sounds kinds sonnet-ish
I like the second one MUCH better
the second one is so much better
First one.. sort of..
just slit your wrists you stupid emo