HELP!!! Which sentence 'SOUNDS BETTER'....? SENTENCE 1 or 2...?
Hi. I am thinking of including either sentence 1 or 2 in a law personal statement. Please suggest which sentence sounds better. Thanks
***SENTENCE 1***
"I believe that this degree will benefit towards a future career in commercial law."
***SENTENCE 2***
"I feel that the knowledge gained through the LLM degree will be a valuable asset in a career associated with commercial law."
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In my opinion, I think sentence #2 sounds better and smarter