Hi. I am thinking of including either sentence 1 or 2 in a law personal statement. Please suggest which sentence sounds better. Thanks.
***SENTENCE 1
"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills which improved my ability to solve legal problems."
or
***SENTENCE 2
"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills which helped me to solve legal problems."
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#1 although you could also replace 'learned' with 'acquired'.
sentence one is alot more profesional sounding
sentence one. it makes you seem more intelligent