Hi. I am thinking of including either sentence 1 or 2 or 3 in a law personal statement. Can someone suggest which sentence sounds better? Thanks
***SENTENCE 1
"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills that have helped me to solve legal problems."
***SENTENCE 2
"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills that have improved my ability to solve legal problems."
***SENTENCE 3
"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills which improved my ability to solve legal problems."
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"While working towards my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I learned relevant legal reasoning skills that have improved my ability to solve legal problems."
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Sentence 2
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Try this one:
While earning my LLB degree at the University of Leicester, I developed significant legal reasoning skills which have enabled me to successfully meet my clients' legal needs.
Sentence 2 sounds the least awkward.
drop the relevant legal skills part, if you are doing LLb, then it can be taken for granted that you are learning relevant skills.And that these skills will help you solve legal problems....something along the line of enlarged my scope of appreciation...range of legal problems that may arise... etc etc